Cyber Bullying - Maya Yolanda (1788203019)
Cyber bullying
is a harsh treatment carried out by a person or group of people, using the help
of electronic equipment that is repeated and continuously on a target who has
difficulty defending theirself (Smith et al, 2008). And cyberbullying greatly
impacts victims. There are three impacts caused by cyberbullying, such as being
able to cause anxiety and fear, the victim will also feel depressed and angry
if bullied continuously, and can make the victim become insecure.
First,
Cyberbullying can lead to anxiety and fear. The study conducted by the National
Youth Violence Prevention Resource Center Sanders (2003; in Anesty, 2009) shows
that bullying can make teenagers feel anxious and fearful, influence the
concentration of learning in school and guide victims of bullying to avoid
school. Because victims feel they will get intimidation related to the
treatment they get on social media.
Second,
Cyberbullying can lead to depression and anger towards victims of bullying if
done repeatedly. Coloroso (2006) suggests that if bullying befalls the victim
repeatedly, the consequence is that the victim will feel depressed and angry,
the victim is angry with theirself, against the perpetrators of bullying,
against those around them and against adults who cannot or do not want to help
them. This then began to affect his academic performance. Even victims of
bullying will be close and tend to prefer to isolate themselves from those
around them.
Third,
the impact that is also very heavy that will be experienced by victims of
bullying is not self-confidence. Even though cyberbullying can also make
bullied people more independent and motivated to show their potential so that
they are no longer lowered, but still if the victims of bullying are not prepared
for oppression or intimidation received by the victim, then this will far more
affect the psychological victims of bullying .
Therefore,
the phenomenon of cyberbullying must be stopped. And this bullying must be a
focus for everyone, so that no more people intend to intimidate someone because
they given that such a large and bad impact on the physical and psychological
victims of bullying.
Haii ayaa
BalasHapusyour paragraph essay meets the standards in making argumentative paragraphs👍, but it would be better if you add, some arguments against the topic you are discussing. and clarify the conclusions of the paragraph
Hi mayooll, I don't see conclusion in your essay
BalasHapusHello Maya, I'm from class 4.2. In your essay, where is the data? I don't find it.
BalasHapusHey, I see your fourth paragraph does not match your thesis statement.
BalasHapusHi, the essay is good, but u should put the conclusion to make it clear.
BalasHapuswhen you say that the bullied victim can be more independent and motivated, are you sure? do you have the dara for it?
BalasHapusthe data*
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