The Impact Of Social Media against the case of Bully - Mesin Ayu Sinaga


            The use of social media is very popular.The nation of Social Media,has covered all corners of the world and various ages.Actually,this gives a huge influence on its user. Especially if the usage is wrong,its impact  so that is rises Bully cases. According to Olweus (2005), Bully is an intentional aggressive action or behavior,carried out by a group of people or someone repeatedly and from time to time to a victim who cannot defend himself easily or as an abouse of power/violence in a manner systematic.Bully is very dangerous because it can cause trauma and punishment.
            The widespread  use of social media has triggered widespread bully cases in Indonesia. As report by m.detik.com, that is  84%  childrens aged  around 12-17 years experience bullying. Based on ICRW surve,84% Indonesian children experience violence, 40 %  suicide because of bullying (reference:  m.liputan 6.com). Based on KPAI Monday,23 July 2018, 22,4% victim of violence and bullying, 25,5% perpetratos of violence and bullying (reference: tempo.com).
            The use of social media can make it easier for users to make ends meet,strengthen brotherhood,facilitate communication,and others. However although,incorrect  use can actually eliminate the function of social media as bully case.Bully, can cause the victim to experience trauma which makes  victims tend to want to commit suicide. Research conduced by national institute of occupational healt , Called bully is the most common cause of suicide.This is  evidenced by research on 1850 partisipants,there are  4,6 %  have had bully and 3,9% have suicidal intentions.
            Bully cases not only impact the victim,but also impact the culprit. Everyone who bullied will get a punishment. Based on UU No.35 Tahun 2014 ,Bully culprit will be sentenced to imprisonment for a maximum  of 3 years 6 months or a maximum find of Rp.72.000.000.If the Bully culprit is an underage child,based on UU No.11 tahun 2012 about the juvenile justice system,The Culprit can be convicted on the condition that is the  aged  around 12-21 years and single. But if the Culprit is an underage child of 12 years,then the punishment is coaching.
            Social media is greatly influences  human llife,therefore social media must be used as wisely as possible,because the use of wrong social media wil have a very  bad impact such as Bully cases.Bully makes the victim and the culprit equally harmed such as trauma and punishment.

Komentar

  1. NELIA GARI5 April 2019 pukul 22.53

    I did not find a thesis statement and I think your paragraph not have unity and not coherence

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  2. Yona Dwi Tirta Syafitri6 April 2019 pukul 04.58

    Hi mesin ayu, before writing data you should first write your argument.

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  3. Lana hasanah9 April 2019 pukul 04.43

    Hello, I think your introduction is a mess and I did not find the thesis statement in your essay

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  4. Mutia Sari Ns9 April 2019 pukul 06.03

    Hi, I think your essay doesn't have a clear thesis statement, you better mention what's the point that you will explain in supporting paragraph. Your essay still have some error punctuation especially in using comma and full stop. for the example, in the sentence "The nation of social media,has covered..." you have to give a space after the comma, so the right sentence will be "The nation of social media, has covered..." and with the full stop as well. In using capital, I found some mistakes too in your essay. You don't have to use capitalization in the middle of sentence except when it words show a name of a person, agency, place, religion, degree, etc.

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  5. Sandra yunira9 April 2019 pukul 06.09

    hi mesin ayu, just now i read your essay, and i have many comment for your essay, the first is your essay it doesnt have a thesis statement. And next, i saw that you dont put the right punctuation there, your paragraph also not coherence and unity..

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  6. Siska Fradina9 April 2019 pukul 06.47

    Hi sist. Where is your thesis statement? And I think you have not able to put the punctuation properly. Your written is very messy.

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  7. Novia Sariahta Silalahi9 April 2019 pukul 07.51

    Hii mesin ayu, I have read your essay, I think your essay looks like a piece of paragraph cut because it doesn't blend between paragraphs with each other.

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  8. Putri adrian sapitri9 April 2019 pukul 08.09

    Hello, i think between thesis statement and suportting sentence not coherence

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  9. Wella9 April 2019 pukul 19.33

    Hello, i think your essay not clear, because i can't find thesis statement on paragraph 1

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  10. Aprilia Chasanah9 April 2019 pukul 20.03

    Hi, for paragraph 1 its seem unclear bcause ,i just see introduction not the thesis argument. Maybe u can mention the right one to make everything clear and can be support with ur supporting argument.

    BalasHapus
  11. Indah Karina26 Mei 2019 pukul 23.20

    Please show me where is the thesis statement? and by the way i didn't really understand your essay.

    BalasHapus

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