Bullying in The School - Rohandi Yusuf (1788203012)


          According to Sejiwa (2008), bullying is a situation in which abuse of physical / mental power / power is carried out by a person / group, and in this situation the victim is unable to defend or defend himself. bullying is very dangerous in the school environment because it can make students worse Should bullies be expelled from school.
The school will be ashamed and spoil the good name of the school. Like cases of intimidation on July 14, 2018, a video of an outstanding female student was intimidated by school children. the intimidating children must take responsibility with the applicable law in the school so that the violation is punished until sentenced to leave the school.
If not released from school there will be many bully victims and will be sustained. Like one of the 11th grade students of SMAN 3 Setiabudi Jakarta who was bullied by his senior. So the school must act decisively to students who try to do rounding
If the bullies are maintained even though he has changed and done good, the victim will still feel trauma. Like the case in one of the school in Pangkal Pinang, the province of Bangka Belitung, the bullies were only sanctioned by 75 points and parents’
The conclusion is that the perpetrators of bullying must get strict punishment. Because bullying can make the victim experience a great trauma.

Komentar

  1. Anwar3 April 2019 pukul 23.41

    I think bullying in the school very quickly problem solve in the core.

    Because when is don't give very hard punishment can to be nam and reputation school to be crash and bad.

    BalasHapus
  2. Vina4 April 2019 pukul 18.58

    Hallo cup,,
    I think that your essay complete of thesis statement and your conclusion and you have data in your essay


    BalasHapus
  3. Sandra yunira5 April 2019 pukul 03.25

    i think your title is not describe what you explain on your essay. and there is no thesis statement i think. your paragraph also not unity and coherence

    BalasHapus
  4. NELIA GARI6 April 2019 pukul 00.04

    why the data is at the beginning of the paragraph even though this is argument, according me that the data is entered after the writing of the argument.

    BalasHapus
  5. Yona Dwi Tirta Syafitri6 April 2019 pukul 04.48

    I think your essay is a little confusing, becaus I see that it supports with an irrelevant title.

    BalasHapus
  6. Lana hasanah9 April 2019 pukul 05.20

    I think your essay not clear and not complete because your essay only 4 paragraph. And I also confused when I read your essay,

    BalasHapus
  7. Novia Sariahta Silalahi9 April 2019 pukul 07.55


    I think your title is too general, and your essay component is incomplete.

    BalasHapus
  8. Siska Fradina9 April 2019 pukul 19.20

    Hi bro. Sory, are you copas this essay? Because I see that your punctuation is very bad. And your thesis statement, supporting idea and conclution is not clearly, it's make us confused.

    BalasHapus
  9. Indah Karina26 Mei 2019 pukul 23.27

    The data from your essay is not strong enough, when you say in the conclusion that the bully should get punishment is it under the law or ?

    BalasHapus
  10. Yolanda Ramadhan17 Januari 2020 pukul 22.01

    Not good

    BalasHapus

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